“Garcin pretends to be at ease but is frightened by the Valet not
having any eyelids” go show you that I am very sophisticated when I
write. I like to show the mature side of me when creating something for other
to see and learn from. My voice is very independent and I want to prove to
others that I know what I’m talking about. I like using higher vocabulary to
create a more professional blogger feeling. Most people do not use whom in their blogs.
I used elevated/formal diction in my text. I
demonstrated it by saying things as such, “Garcin tries to make peace with Inez, explaining that they
must be courteous to each other in order to make the best out of their
situation. She tells him that there is no need to be frightened since they are
already dead, but Garcin thinks they have not yet begun to suffer.” But
mostly all of my text is elevated and gives off that formal feeling.
I used sentence length for syntax because all
my sentnces are a reasonable length and I try not to run on with my sentences.
I usually try to use commas. Like in this sentence,” Garcin agrees, saying that their being together is a
fluke.”
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